radiodark's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gabriella]

You seem attached to the style and poor anatomy for some reason, so although I find it trite and derivative, let's focus on other things. The shading is lazily done and the the color scheme seems chosen at random. I recommend drawing from life a bit more- it'll give you a better sense of how light works. Learning some color theory will help too- I'm sure if you google it you can find some nice tutorials.

DragonPunch responds:

I just got through explaining that I wanted a more cartoony style. You may be right about the color scheme though. I heavily disagree with the anatomy. I do understand the basics, I just wanted a more cartoony feel. I also wanted a more simplistic style of shading, which might be why it looks rather lazy. Your critique wasn't thorough enough, by the way. What needs to be fixed? What can I do better next time? Hints please!

[Self Portrait]

Thank you.

[Cristina Scabbia]

Neat picture. How did you make it?

MinioN99 responds:

I painted it in Photoshop.

[Fus Ro Dah!]

Awesome stuff. Just so you know, you need at least four of your pieces marked public or you can't be scouted.

ThePrisoner responds:

Thanks very much!

[Flood Flood]

Seriously man, how dare you not copy a reference photo exactly?

Good job, especially on the hair. If anything, I'd like to see you deviate from the reference more, but this is lovely and there's not much to improve on.

[Easter Bunny]

Just so you know, you need to mark at least four of your works public in order to be scouted.

[Me?]

Just so you know, at least four of your pieces need to be marked public for your work to be scouted and thus appear in the art portal. You are not scoutable at present.

[Yo mama]

One thing- you might want to take a color picker to the ng background, then paintbucket the whitespace that dark gray, so that it's clear at a glance that that's not part of the piece.

[Tanita-sama]

Decent!

Just so you know, you need at least four works marked public before you can be scouted- to mark things public, there's a box towards the bottom you can check on the submission page for each work.

[Hail To The King, Baby]

MOARRRR

Please.

Lintire responds:

Never fear, more is on the way!

I WILL NEVER STOP PUNISHING THE ARTISTIC WORLD WITH MY PRESENCE, FUCKERS.