radiodark's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Funny but...

Mildly amusing, but the least you could do is scan it properly and rotate the image so that the text is right side up.

[The Contagious Smile]

decent but...

This is largely well handled, but the mouth quite honestly is terrifying and the photograph is blurry. Tripods are wonderful things.

Scarifying responds:

Yea I agree. The photo too was very blurry and hard to work from.

[Furniture finish test]

looks fine to me

The solder mark is actually really well placed- so symmetrically it looks intentional. It might bother visiting metalworkers who recognize it as a soldering line, but I think the average viewer would just assume the silver line was a decoration.

Did the copper piping come with the ribbon-wrapped tube effect, or did you add that?

DarkSword responds:

Yeah, the soldermark position is intentionnal, I wanted two separate pieces, rolled in different dirrections to merge in the center. It was also planned that it would completely dissapear when the handle would be electroplated, since the solder material was filed and polished to be flush with the copper (you can't feel it, only see it for now.. )

The ribbon wrap is from me, this tube came in 2 foot diameter roll, so didn't had anything close to a handle shape.. : )

I know it's a bit crude, but I am not equiped with fancy tools, so I came up with a simple but still ok design, that like I said, is very nice to the touch.. I could probably engrave it to add some visual complexity.. : )

[mask]

Collage, you mean?

Do you perhaps mean collage (the integration of multiple two dimensional elements into a single composition) rather than college (higher education institution) ? Otherwise, the face is very nice- put the head on a neck on it and give it some sort of background, and I'd give it a ten.

desktoppirate responds:

lol no, higher education it is. it's on a poster with text etc but i didnt think to upload that...

[THE MCSHARKEST]

blur begone

I agree with the other commenter: the blur is hurting the image. It's also hurting my eyes, as they vainly attempt to focus on the picture fail miserably.
If you're certain you want to keep the blur, I'd recommend localizing it so that some parts are blurred and other parts are in focus, which is a good way of guiding the viewer to around the design. Selectively focused areas will also give viewer's eyes a place to rest, and save an otherwise worthwhile image.

HOLIMOUNT responds:

hehehehe now i fix it thanks for the comment reallyc helpfull

[Bloaty Bags]

Well done

My reaction (before reading author's comments): I have no idea what hell these are, but they're rendered so skillfully I can't help but like them.
I'd recommend finishing the upper two sketches or erasing them, though, as they're distracting.